【习作要求】
  　　假设你是你校英语报记者，请根据下面的一起交通事故的现场报告单写一篇短文。

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时间地点	3月13日深夜 11：49左右 大川至开山高速公路
事故原因	一辆大巴车，由于驾驶员超速驾驶导致翻车
造成结果	6名乘客及司机当场死亡，20多名乘客受伤
救治措施	事故发生后立刻有人报警，警察、救护车迅速赶到现场实施救护。公交公司领导也很快赶到医院看望伤员。

    

    
    　　【经典范文】
    　　On March 13, at around 11:49 at night, a serious traffic accident happened on the Dachuan-Kaishan expressway, where a bus was upside down. Six passengers along with the driver died immediately and more than twenty were injured. Local police and ambulances arrived at the scene shortly after someone called 110 about the accident and gave their aid as soon as they could. Officials from the bus company also quickly came to the hospital to see the injured, which gave them a great comfort. Later it was discovered that speeding and carelessness on the driver’s part were the causes of the accident. This accident is further evidence that safety should always be the first.
    
    　　【名师点评】
    　　习作叙事完整、条理清楚、主次分明。在语言方面尝试使用定语从句和主语从句，使短文句子间的逻辑关系更加严谨。除了必要的有关事故的叙述，最后添加了发布消息的意义，整篇短文干脆利落，词句使用准确，是一篇不错的习作。

  

   

   

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